the lame monster

First sentence is the original. Second sentence is what she changed it to be. Ain't it a bloody pain?

"Please fill in / change (where necessary) the items of uniform allocated to the staffs"

"Please add or / change (where necessary) the items of uniform allocated to the staffs according to the various category of allocation"

and from "colors" to "colours".

My reaction? See mamamamy perperperpoker face, perperperpoker face....